Skill: write-like-james @ a5ff054 · typed hard type: write-mcqs @ a5ff054
Topic 12 "Sound" — your read (28 September 2026, night)
Three lessons: every sound is made by something vibrating; you hear a sound because the vibration travels through the air to your ear; the farther a thing is from the sound, the less it shakes. One coined word, the atom's own (vibrating), after "shakes back and forth, very fast". Sound carries energy and is never a form of it. Read by the author as you, then a non-author review (31 of 32 findings applied) and two cold reads (55 of 55, then 41 of 41 on the changed items). Reply by number.
The one that unblocks the bank
1. Does the typed hard type work for you? Your night ruling is applied without asking: the bank's hard items are text entry, not MCQs; easy and medium stay four-option MCQs and are the bulk. The one hard type chains two ideas and asks for the outcome in one or two words:
- Naomi bangs a gong, and across the hall Oren hears it ring. Then Naomi grabs the gong with both hands and keeps holding it still. What does Oren hear now? — accepts nothing / no sound / no ringing / no noise / silence / quiet / not a sound / no more ringing, each with or without "he hears", and "it is quiet". Hard because a child must chain "held still → not vibrating → no sound" with "what he hears is the vibration that travelled through the air", then produce the answer.
- "It gets quieter" and "it fades" are refused: the gong is held still, so it is not vibrating and makes no sound — the lesson's own line is "The shaking stops. The sound stops too."
Recommendation: approve; the bank's hard slot (at most eight of about fifty) is generated from this form on fresh sounding things held still. Approve / accept "quieter" too / say what else
2. Do the five question types stand? Six exemplars on five types, coverage table with no empty row; type 4 pairs distance with the vibration travelling through the air (three jars at J, K, L from a drum, drawn); type 5 above pairs vibration with hearing. Type 3 always moves the thing "a few steps", so "stops at once" is never a second right answer.
The five types and the coverage table Approve all / strike these / edit these
The lessons
3. L01 Sound comes from vibration — a ruler over a desk edge, still and silent, then flicked: it shakes back and forth very fast and buzzes; a drum skin makes rice jump; a rubber band over a box hums; your own throat when you hum; the ruler held still again goes quiet. Article · script · quiz Fine / say where
4. L02 Sound travels to your ear — a drum across a field: the skin shakes the air next to it, that air shakes the next air, and the vibration reaches the boy's ear; a bell in a tower; a dog barking behind a boy who is not looking. The quiz visits the cases where a child thinks it switches off: back turned, eyes shut, in the dark, no touch. Article · quiz Fine / say where
5. L03 Sound shakes things at a distance — the same drum and the same tray of rice at three distances: close, it jumps a lot; farther, less; far, barely. The drum never touches the rice: "the drum's sound carries energy to the rice." Article · quiz Fine / say where
6. One sentence to confirm once Topic 11 lands. This topic says "the drum's sound carries energy to the rice" (the light-carries-energy form from your language rules) and tests it in one quiz item and one recall item. Topic 11 is being written in parallel; when its wording is final, the coordinator reads this sentence against it once. Fine / change now
Applied without asking: hard items typed, not MCQs · every attached question stands alone, no "in the video" (one has its own drawing) · no option bundles a verdict with a reason · every claim a bare yes / no · every stem positive · three summary questions · intro ends on a ready line and a poll · colour in the figures · people, hands and the dog marked for generation with briefs and kinds (cartoon / photo / svg).
Also on the site
Intro and poll · mixed practice · summary and three questions · the six exemplars
After you answer
1 and 2 → bank of about 50 from the approved types, blind read, hand-over folder for David.
<details><summary>What the reviews found and what changed (collapsed)</summary>
- Non-author review (
REVIEW_G3T12_2026-09-28.md): 1 block (the typed item's open ask — closed by the bounded "what does he hear now?" form above), 15 fixes (all applied: the dog now vibrates like the drum and bell; no glow crosses the gap before a "the light" distractor; no article line tells the reader to carry a drum; the two typed practice items no longer hand each other their answers; a comparison item lost its numbers-in-prose; five drawing faults fixed and re-opened), 16 suggestions (scene and name repeats and the "let's" line taken; three left with reasons; the Topic 11 cross-read kept as notes). Full adjudication inBUILD_RECORD_G3T12.md. - Cold read 1 (55 items, key-less): 55 of 55 agree; its flags applied (a claim made positive; parallel distractors; "a few steps farther"; names and words).
- Cold read 2 (42 changed items): 41 of 41 keyed items agree, typed answers on-list; two small disputes applied (the rice attached question lost a drawing that contradicted its stem; one claim stem shortened).
- Checker: 0 FAIL, 1 WARN (the type sheet holds exemplars only, by design).
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