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Topic 37 "Life cycles of plants and animals": your read (2 October 2026)
Skim first
The lessons in teaching order, each with its one rule sentence; then the intro script; then the question types. The review page follows.
The lessons and their rules
| Lesson | Atom | Rule sentence |
|---|---|---|
| L01 How pollen moves from flower to flower: pollination | LIF4-040 | Pollen is a flower's yellow dust. An insect or the wind carries it to another flower. That is pollination. |
| L02 When pollen arrives, the flower can make seeds | LIF4-041 | Pollen lands on the sticky top. It joins with the flower's inside part: fertilization. Then the seeds form. A flower with no pollen makes no seeds. |
| L03 Why seeds travel away from the parent plant | LIF4-042 | Seeds dropped under the parent would be crowded and shaded. The wind, water or animals carry seeds away. Each new plant gets space and light. |
| L04 What a seed needs to start growing: germination | LIF4-043 | A seed needs water and warmth to start growing. It does not need light to start. That is germination: root, then shoot, then leaves. |
| L05 Complete change or gradual growth? Sort the life cycle | LIF4-044 | The body changes completely: a complete change. The young looks like a small grown-up: gradual growth. A butterfly and a frog change completely. A grasshopper and a dog just grow bigger. |
The intro script (116 words, about 58 s)
Here's Zoey's backyard in early summer. A pumpkin vine is covered in yellow flowers, and in the hedge a robin sits on three blue eggs. By fall, pumpkins full of seeds hang where some flowers were, and three grown robins fly from the hedge. A plant's life and an animal's life both go round in a cycle. But how does a flower turn into a pumpkin full of seeds? To find out, we will look at how a flower makes its seeds, how seeds travel and start to grow, and why some young animals look nothing like their parents. Okay, so are you ready to find out how plants and animals go round their life cycles?
The question types (from TYPES_G4T37.md)
- Type 1 (MCQ · 040): what the yellow dust is; which part pollen must reach; which part it came from; what carries it for a petal-less flower; what is true of a wind-pollinated flower — pollen / seeds / sap / soil; flower parts; carriers; four statements
- Type 2 (MCQ · 040): which of four scenes is pollination; what carried the pollen — four one-sentence scenes (one is pollen reaching another flower)
- Type 3 (typed · 040): the name of the yellow dust — pollen, the pollen, child spellings
- Type 4 (MCQ · 041): what a flower can do once pollen lands; which part grows into the seeds; what grows where a pollinated flower was; how many seeds a flower with no pollen makes — make seeds / more pollen / new petals / a root; parts; outcomes; none / one / a few / hundreds
- Type 5 (MCQ · 041): where fruit grows when half the flowers are bagged; how many melons from three pollinated flowers of ten — four outcomes; none / three / seven / ten
- Type 6 (MCQ · 041): the reason for very few fruits — four single reasons
- Type 7 (MCQ keyed on the term · 044): which words name the kind of life cycle, from its whole definition — complete change / gradual growth / pollination / germination (sisters)
- Type 8 (MCQ; typed · 041): the name of the joining; what the flower can now make (typed) — pollination / germination / fertilization / gradual growth; seeds, seed, a seed …
- Type 9 (MCQ, the carrier set · 042): what carries a described seed away — the wind / water / an animal's fur / an animal that eats the fruit
- Type 10 (MCQ · 042): how seeds got along a fox's path; what a far-landing seed gets; what happens to young trees under the parent — four outcomes
- Type 11 (MCQ · 043): which two things seeds need; which part comes out first; what a cold pot lacked; which of four seeds germinates; what happens under straw — water and warmth …; parts; water / warmth / sunlight / soil; four cases
- Type 12 (typed · 043): the one thing missing (water; warmth) — water, wet, moisture …; warmth, warm, heat …
- Type 13 (MCQ · 041, 042, 043, 044): a named child's claim is wrong — what is the correct reason; a two-step prediction — four single-statement reasons; four places
- Type 14 (MCQ · 044): which of four animals has a complete change / gradual growth; which young looks like a small grown-up; which animal shares the alligator's kind — four animals, each with its young described in one clause
- Type 15 (MCQ, drawn ring · 044): which letter marks a described stage — the ring's four letters (M N P R; K L M N; R S T V)
- Type 16 (order · 043, 044): the stages first → last — four stages
Five lessons for five atoms, in one class: Miss Zimmerman's, with Tamara, Zoey and Theodore. Tamara watches a bee crawl out of an apple flower dusted yellow and asks what the dust is; the lesson cuts the flower open, follows the pollen on the bee and on the wind, and coins "pollination" (L01). Theodore's uncle sets a truck of beehives between his apple trees, because without bees he gets hardly any apples; the lesson shows the pollen's tiny part joining a tiny part deep in the flower, coins "fertilization", and shows the apple growing round the seeds (L02). Tamara blows a dandelion clock and the lesson asks why a plant sends its seeds away: space and light, carried by the wind, water, fur or an animal that eats the fruit (L03). Zoey sets up three cups of bean seeds and the dark cupboard wins; water and warmth, never light, and the word is "germination" (L04). The capstone sorts the class caterpillars and Theodore's grasshopper into a complete change or gradual growth, with one question: does the young look like a small grown-up? (L05). Every key agreed by three cold readers over two bundles; three reviews are applied; the one bank key with a tell is trimmed. Pictures are placeholders until you answer.
The questions the author put to you (built as recommended)
1. Does "metamorphosis" stay as the scientists' word, said once and never tested?
The tested words are "complete change" and "gradual growth", the pair the architecture row gives.
L05 says once: "Scientists call a complete change complete metamorphosis, and gradual growth incomplete metamorphosis."
Florida's test (SC.4.L.16.4) uses those words; the register writes "(complete metamorphosis)" as a gloss. The word has 13 letters.
Recommendation: keep the plain pair as the tested words; say "metamorphosis" once, as built.
Keep as built / coin and test both metamorphosis words / never say it
2. Is "fertilization" right to coin at Grade 4?
When a tiny part of the pollen joins a tiny part deep inside the flower, the lesson calls that joining fertilization.
The register's atom (LIF4-041) names the word; it is 13 letters, so it is recognised among its sisters and never typed.
Recommendation: coin it, as built.
Coin it / say "the joining" throughout and drop the term
3. Does the frog sort as a complete change, beside the butterfly?
A strict insect reading keeps "complete change" for egg, larva, pupa, adult. Grade 4 standards and texts put the frog with the butterfly.
The lesson's one sorting question (does the young look like a small grown-up?) gives the same answer: a tadpole does not.
Built: the frog in L05's run with its ring, and three bank items (a ring, a toad order, a tadpole-and-frog reason item).
Recommendation: keep the frog.
Keep / drop the frog from the sort
4. Does L04's one line about light for the grown plant stay?
The line is "Once its leaves are open, the plant needs light to make its own food."
L04 teaches that a seed needs water and warmth and no light to start. Without the line a child reads "no light" as true of the whole plant.
It is one sentence, says what Topic 34 teaches, and names no mechanism.
Recommendation: keep it.
Keep / cut it
5. Does L05 stand at 342 words, trimmed rather than split?
The review asked whether L05 should be split; v2 cut the chicken case and a repeated closing line instead (372 → 342).
L01 (317), L02 (307) and L04 (309) sit just over the 300 mark; every article has a subtitle or figure at least every seven lines.
Recommendation: keep one article each.
Keep / split L05 after the two rings, with a check between
6. Does Zoey stay as the third child's name?
The pool gave this topic Tamara, Tatum and Theodore. Two blind readers read Tamara and Tatum as one child on the same page.
Zoey is used by no other topic in Grades 3 or 4, and the pool row now reads Tamara, Zoey, Theodore.
Recommendation: keep Zoey.
Keep / pick another name
The lessons
| Lesson | What it teaches | Video / article words | Quiz items | Figures |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| L01 How pollen moves from flower to flower: pollination | The flower cut open: little stalks with yellow knobs (pollen), a sticky top, a green cup where the seeds will form; a bee carries pollen to the next flower without meaning to; the wind carries corn's; pollen moving from flower to flower is pollination | 144 / 317 | 13 | 8 |
| L02 When pollen arrives, the flower can make seeds | Pollen lands on the sticky top; a tiny part travels down and joins a tiny part deep inside, in the green cup (fertilization); the seed forms and the apple grows round it; a flower that no pollen reaches makes no seeds | 145 / 307 | 10 | 6 |
| L03 Why seeds travel away from the parent plant | Every seed dropped under the parent would be crowded and shaded, and most would die; carried away, each gets space and light; four carriers: the wind, water, an animal's fur, an animal that eats the fruit | 146 / 282 | 10 | 7 |
| L04 What a seed needs to start growing: germination | Three cups of bean seeds: damp and warm in the dark sprouts; cold or dry does not; a seed needs water and warmth, not light and not soil, because its food is packed inside; the root comes out first | 149 / 309 | 10 | 5 |
| L05 Complete change or gradual growth? Sort the life cycle | Butterfly, ladybug and frog: the young looks nothing like the grown-up and changes completely; grasshopper and dog: the young looks like a small grown-up and just grows; one question sorts them | 150 / 342 | 13 | 12 |
Applied without asking
Every claim item is bare yes / no with the correction in the why, and every bank claim asks for the correct reason; every coined term has a recognition item before any recall; the five long terms are recognised among their sisters and never typed, and the four typed words are pollen, seeds, water and warmth; every attached question stands alone; units are words; "sweet juice" for nectar; no flower part by its grade 6-8 name; the bee carries pollen "without meaning to", and two claim items test that very belief; every lettered ring reads its letters from one list and every order key runs first to last. The three reviews' findings and Reader C's notes were applied at once: two items that keyed on plants that pollinate themselves (a netted bean, bagged peppers) now use a zucchini and a gourd vine; a pecan tree replaces wheat; the flower's seed place is said one way everywhere; a wildflower order item now names its start; a typed item asks for what forms "inside" the flower; eleven key tells to zero; three ring items ask for a stage by name; the item rings read at 18 px on a phone; the frog has four legs and the grasshopper's egg sits in the soil; "sown" and "gale" are plain words; pumpkins flower in early summer; Tatum became Zoey; 129 items held by the third reader; 52 bank items, 9 to 12 per atom; 15 picture placeholders with briefs; the seven-video batch is built and checked, not sent.
Also on the site
Topic intro and poll · summary and three questions · mixed practice · the PP100 bank · the type sheet
After you answer
Nothing on the page changes if you keep all six. Testing "metamorphosis" is one term entry and two items; "the joining" instead of "fertilization" is one word in about twenty lines and one fewer term; dropping the frog is one case in L05, its ring, and three bank items; cutting the light line is one sentence; splitting L05 is a second article with a check between; another name is a one-word swap. Either way the picture pass starts, and your notes on the scripts send the seven-video batch.
What the reviews found, and what changed
The blind read (two readers, 2 October) and the re-read (Reader C)
Two readers answered 112 and 122 rows cold and agreed every MCQ key. Their flags, all applied in v2: a five-stage wildflower order with no stated start (two defensible first stages); a typed item where "a honeydew" and "fruit" were as right as "seeds"; a key that was the only option with a comma and "and"; a yes / no run whose keys alternated A B A B; seedless watermelons in a stem that keyed "no seeds"; "cocoon" defensible for the caterpillar's case until the stem named the hard case; "spores" offered where no lesson said it; a "cold spring" that let a child defend "the young almonds froze"; the flower's seed place said two ways; four stems or keys that echoed their answer; Tamara and Tatum on one page; "sown" and "gale".
Reader C then read the whole v2 bundle, 129 items, and agreed every key. The two re-scened plants (zucchini, gourd) need an insect, so their no-pollen keys are honest; germination is one story in every item (water and warmth, no light, no soil); no item gives the bee or the plant a motive; the three rings ask by name and their descriptions show the stage without naming it. Three small notes: "spores" in PR-02 (left: Grade 3 Topic 37 teaches the word, and PR-02 is that topic's retrieval item); PP-09's key the longest by two words and the only option with a comma (trimmed in v3); PP-36's young frog with four legs a possible pull for a weaker student (left: the stem asks for "the tadpole" by name and the lesson line says the tadpole has no legs; a watch item for live data).
The guidance, questions and accuracy review (2 October)
The topic teaches the right things in the right order, the reviewer said, and the record's claims hold. Two items had to change, and did: both built the no-pollen case on a plant that pollinates itself, so the key was false of the real plant. A netted bean flower still makes a pod and bagged pepper flowers still make peppers; L02's item is now a netted zucchini flower and the bank's bagged flowers are on a gourd vine, and the type sheet's bar list now says no self-pollinating plant as a no-pollen case (beans, peas, peppers, tomatoes, wheat, oats). Worth fixing, all done: wheat as a wind-pollinated case became a pecan tree; a greenhouse grower shaking tomato flowers (which moves the flower's own pollen) became a grower with a small soft brush moving pollen flower to flower; "metamorphosis" said with "in this course" became one plain sentence naming both scientists' words; a tadpole line was added so the frog's young is named; a "bee means to help" belief had no item and now has one (with a TRUE twin so the lesson's claims are not all No); ladybug larvae are spiky, not spotted; pumpkins flower in early summer; five key tells.
The "green cup" ruling: L01 said the seed place three ways ("inside a green cup", "deep inside", "the tiny parts where the seeds will form"), and the figure review confirmed the drawing puts the seed parts inside the cup. Not an error; the lesson, the figure captions, the script and PP-09 now say "the tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup", and v3 trims the item's key to "the tiny parts deep inside the green cup" so no comma marks it.
The reviewer answered the author's five questions as the page above shows, and left the frog, the rider and the once-said "metamorphosis" to you.
The figure review (2 October)
What a student notices first: one cut-open flower that recurs with the same shape, two pink flowers with a dotted arrow between them, four seed-travel cards, a bean strip, and life-cycle rings that all turn the same way. Five fixes before the cold read, all made: on a phone every label had shrunk to 5 to 8 px and the item rings' letters to 6 px (the rings are now a 320-unit frame with 18-unit letters, measured at about 18 px in a 360 px view; the cutaway, cards and tables have larger type in tighter frames); the eaten-seed card's droppings were three pale dots (now a bitten berry above the arrow and a small dark mound with pale seeds); the headache cutaway's frame was two-thirds empty; two leader lines pointed at the wrong place; the frog glyph had two legs where the blind text said four. The ring audit: every ring runs clockwise from the top; the grasshopper's egg moved from a leaf to a soil pod; the chicken ring went with the chicken case; the frog ring is now placed beside the tadpole paragraph. Every brief now opens with what the eye goes to first.
The bank, in brief
52 items in content/G4T37_pp100_bank.py: 46 four-option MCQs, 4 typed words (pollen, seeds, water, warmth) and 2 order items (an oat seed germinating; a toad's four stages). Per atom: LIF4-040 10 · LIF4-041 11 · LIF4-042 10 · LIF4-043 9 · LIF4-044 12. Easy 16, medium 22, hard 14, sorted easy to hard and rising with the atom's place in the topic. MCQ keys A 10 · B 12 · C 12 · D 12. Sixteen question types, one exemplar each on the type sheet: what the yellow dust is and which part it must reach; which of four scenes is pollination; type the dust's name; what a flower can do once pollen lands; where fruit grows when half the flowers are bagged; the reason for very few fruits; the kind of life cycle from its definition; the name of the joining; which carrier takes a described seed; how seeds got where they are; which seeds will germinate; type the one thing a seed lacked; a child's claim is wrong, pick the reason; which of four animals has a given kind of life cycle; which letter on a ring marks a named stage; the stages in order. Every scene is fresh against the lessons, quizzes and practice (the scene-noun grep is in the build record), and the type sheet lists the draw constraints.
The records, in full
The build record (v1, v2 reviews applied, v3 polish)
Skill: course-build → write-lesson (L01 fact form; L02 process at recognition level; L03 contrast and four carrier cards; L04 fact on a three-cup fair test; L05 classification capstone) → write-example-sequence, design-check-sequence, sentence-atomise, write-explanation, write-mcqs; write-video-script (intro, five lesson scripts, summary) @ efd8fba
Grade 4 Topic 37 — Life cycles of plants and animals — build record (v1, 2 October 2026)
What this is, in plain words
Five short lessons on how a flowering plant makes the next plant and how two kinds of animal grow up. Pollen moves from flower to flower (pollination); once it arrives the flower can make seeds (fertilization); the seeds are carried away so each new plant gets space and light; a seed starts to grow with water and warmth and no light (germination); and an animal's life cycle is either a complete change (caterpillar to butterfly) or gradual growth (a young grasshopper just grows bigger). Written without a blueprint under James's 2 October ruling; the structural decisions are below. Nothing is committed and nothing is sent.
Files: content/G4T37.py (TOPIC, PRACTICE, hooks), content/G4T37_lessons.py (L01–L03), content/G4T37_lessons2.py (L04–L05), content/G4T37_pp100_bank.py (52 items), content/figures.py (49 figures), check_lettered_items.py (the lettered-stage and order-key guard), records/TYPES_G4T37.md, blind/2026-10-02/ (bundle and sequestered keys), handoff/G4T37/videos/batch_G4T37.json + READY.md (built, checked, NOT sent).
Decisions made without a blueprint
| Lesson | Title | Headache scene | Example sequence | Check type | Video? |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| L01 LIF4-040 | How pollen moves from flower to flower: pollination | The school garden's apple tree in spring; Tamara watches a bee crawl out of a flower dusted yellow and asks what the dust is | FACT form, examples only: the flower cut open (pollen named, the sticky top, where the seeds form) → the bee (pollen sticks, rubs off at the next flower) → the wind (corn) → the name last | (a) fluency: y/n "Is this pollination?" with near misses (petals blown, pollen washed to soil, a bee flying home), term recognition, the pollen-is-seeds claim | video and article |
| L02 LIF4-041 | When pollen arrives, the flower can make seeds | Theodore's uncle's orchard: a truck of beehives set between the trees; "Without bees we get hardly any apples" | process at recognition level: recap pollination → pollen lands on the sticky top → a tiny part travels down and joins (the coin) → the seed forms, the apple grows around it (Grade 3's fruit strip, imported) → the no-pollen contrast | (c) what / why FRQ (fresh case: squash in Ohio with no bees) / misconception / transfer (a greenhouse grower shaking tomato flowers) | video and article |
| L03 LIF4-042 | Why seeds travel away from the parent plant | Tamara blows a dandelion clock in the park; Miss Zimmerman asks why the dandelion sends its seeds away | imagined removal (every seed dropped under the parent: crowded, shaded, most die) → seeds carried away (space and light) → four carrier cards in ONE frame "<carrier> carries the seed away" (wind, water, fur, eaten) | (a) fluency on the fixed carrier set (keys 0 1 2 3), then the why, two claims, a where-will-they-grow, the grape transfer | video and article |
| L04 LIF4-043 | What a seed needs to start growing: germination | Zoey's three cups of bean seeds: damp in the warm dark cupboard, damp in the fridge, dry on the sunny shelf; Theodore bets on the light | the result table after a week → what each cup had and lacked → the fact (water and warmth; not light, not soil, because the food is inside the seed — Grade 3's seed line word for word) → the coin → the order strip | (c) what / claims (dark can never start — No; soil for food — No; two TRUE claims) / the part that comes first / ORDER / term last | video and article |
| L05 LIF4-044 | Complete change or gradual growth? Sort the life cycle | The class butterfly cage of caterpillars and Theodore's jar with a grasshopper no longer than a grain of rice | two frames, word for word, alternating: butterfly (complete) → grasshopper (gradual) → ladybug → chicken → frog → dog; the sort table's one question; the rule | (a) fluency on the fixed set complete change / gradual growth (c g g c g c), two lettered rings from ONE list, ORDER, three claims | video and article |
One line each, with the reason:
- Five lessons, one per atom, in register order — each payoff is one clause; the capstone (044) closes the topic as the architecture row says.
- "pollen" is explained then named in L01, and listed as a term — the register's behaviour line uses the word, Grade 3 never taught it, and every later line leans on it; it is the topic's one short typed key.
- "pollination", "fertilization" and "germination" are coined, as the register writes them; "complete change" and "gradual growth" are the class words — the architecture row gives the plain pair; the register's "(complete metamorphosis)" is read as the technical gloss, so "metamorphosis" is said ONCE in L05's article as the scientists' word and never tested (Questions for James).
- L01 is examples only (bee, wind) with no non-example in the run — "pollen moves from flower to flower" is true of every case of pollination; the near misses (petals blown away, pollen washed to the soil, a bee that flies home) do the boundary work in the checks (Forces log: leave the non-example out when none sits at the boundary).
- The flower's parts are named in plain words — "the little stalks with yellow knobs", "the sticky top", "the green cup", "the tiny parts where the seeds form"; stamen / anther / stigma / ovary are grades 6-8's, and the register's 041 cross note sends "two parents" to 6-8 too, so the mechanism stops at "a tiny part of the pollen … joins with a tiny part in the green cup".
- The bee carries pollen "without meaning to" — the CLAUDE.md rule against purposive verbs for young readers; never "delivers".
- The slogan "No pollen, no seeds" became "A flower that no pollen reaches makes no seeds" — S2/S38 (every sentence has a verb) failed the slogan in the lexicon, the rule card and five fb lines; the sentence form is now everywhere.
- L03's "why" is the outcome the seed gets (space, light), never the plant's wish — no "wants" or "tries"; the crowded / spaced pair is the imagined removal (R165).
- The bird's droppings are said plainly — "the seeds pass through the bird and come out in its droppings"; a nine-year-old knows the word, and the euphemism would hide the event.
- L04 is a three-cup fair test (damp warm dark / damp cold dark / dry warm light) — one variable differs per pair, and the dark cup that sprouts confronts "seeds need light" head on; "fair test" (Topic 2's coin) is leaned on, not re-taught, and the table carries the data.
- L04 keeps one rider: "Once its leaves are open, the plant needs light to make its own food" — without it a child reads "does not need light" as true of the whole plant; it is one line, states a fact Topic 34 teaches, and names no mechanism.
- The germination strip runs left → right as first → last, and the rings run clockwise from the top as first → last — the direction convention for every order and lettered item; stated once here.
- L05's frog is sorted as a complete change — Florida's SC.4.L.16.4 and the grade-4 texts that serve it put the frog with the butterfly (the body form changes completely); the lesson's one question ("does the young look like a small grown-up?") sorts it the same way. Entomology's larva / pupa / nymph words are not used (Questions for James).
- Every lettered ring reads its letters from
figures.STAGE_SETSthroughfigures.stage_letter, andcheck_lettered_items.pyre-reads each stem's descriptor against the drawing (11 items, 0 mismatch) — Topic 21's inversion cannot recur. - Every lesson gets a video — L01 and L02 need the cut flower seen; L03 is four cards a child should watch; L04 is a result a child should see; L05 is a classification run.
- The intro is one scene (Zoey's backyard: a pumpkin vine in flower and a robin's nest), coins nothing, says out loud that a plant's life and an animal's life both go round in a cycle (the register's cross note on 044), and never shows L01's bee or L05's caterpillar.
Grade 3 doorways, recalled by one item and one line each, never re-taught: Grade 3 Topic 37 ("A plant's flower is where its seeds are made." — L01 article, L01-q1, PR-1; "A seed is a plant's package for growing a new plant: a tiny plant and its food, wrapped in a coat." — L04 article, L03-q1, L04-q1, PR-2, PR-13 typed); Grade 3 Topic 40 (the butterfly order "egg, caterpillar, chrysalis, butterfly" — L05 article and ring; "A caterpillar resting inside the hard case it grew around itself is called a chrysalis" — L05 article, L05-q1; the frog order — PR-3). Grade 3 Topic 37's flower_body and fruit_panel drawers are IMPORTED, not redrawn. Neighbouring topics' content as built: Topics 33–36 do not yet exist in this folder (read the architecture rows instead); Topics 16 and 22 read for the schema.
The simplification, named: the pollen's "tiny part" that travels down and joins (a pollen tube and an egg cell, grades 6-8); "a flower that no pollen reaches makes no seeds" (self-pollinating plants exist; none is named at this grade); the frog's tadpole as a complete change with no larva / pupa words; "the sticky top" for the stigma. No note is printed in the articles.
Questions for James (the build does not wait on them)
- Should "metamorphosis" be coined and tested at Grade 4, or stay as the once-said scientists' word? Context: the register writes "complete change of body form (complete metamorphosis)"; the architecture row gives "complete change / gradual growth"; the word has 13 letters (RECALL_BY_MCQ territory) and Florida's SC.4.L.16.4 uses it. Recommendation: keep "complete change / gradual growth" as the tested words and say "metamorphosis" once, as built; if you want it tested, it is one term entry and two MCQ items.
- Is "fertilization" right to coin at Grade 4? Context: the register's 041 behaviour says "this joining is called fertilisation"; it is a 13-letter word recalled by MCQ, and every later line uses it. Recommendation: coin it, as built; the fallback is "the joining" throughout and one fewer term.
- Is the frog sorted as a complete change acceptable alongside the insects? Context: a strict insect reading would keep "complete metamorphosis" to egg-larva-pupa-adult; the grade-4 standards and texts put the frog with the butterfly, and the lesson's single sorting question gives the same answer. Recommendation: keep the frog (built in L05's run, PR-3's recall, and three bank items); dropping it is three deletions.
- Does the L04 rider ("Once its leaves are open, the plant needs light to make its own food") stay? Context: one atom per lesson says cut a neighbour fact; the rider stops a wrong generalisation. Recommendation: keep it (built).
- Do L05 (372 words) and the three articles just over 300 (L01 308, L02 307, L04 309) stand? Context: the brief allows above 300 with a subtitle or figure every ≤ 8 lines and a reason; L05's longest run without a subtitle or figure is seven lines, the others' four; L05 carries six cases in two frames plus two rings. Recommendation: keep as one article each (built); the split point for L05 would be after the two rings, with the sort run as a second article.
Counts
- Articles (idea + rule + subtitle words): L01 308 · L02 307 · L03 282 · L04 309 · L05 372. Scripts (spoken words,
check_g4_articles.py): L01 140 · L02 146 · L03 146 · L04 149 · L05 148; intro 115 (two question marks); summary 169 (opens "Here's everything we found out about life cycles of plants and animals."). - Quizzes: L01 11 · L02 10 (one FRQ) · L03 10 · L04 10 (one order) · L05 13 (two lettered rings, one order). Attached: one per lesson, three on the summary. Practice: 13 (three Grade 3 retrievals first; two typed terms last).
- PP100 bank: 52 items — per atom LIF4-040 10 · 041 11 · 042 10 · 043 9 · 044 12; easy 16 · medium 22 · hard 14; 46 four-option MCQs, 4 typed (pollen, seeds, water, warmth), 2 order; every hard item carries
hb. Bank MCQ keys A 10 · B 12 · C 12 · D 12. - Figures: 49 — 34 SVG by code, 10 photo placeholders, 5 cartoon placeholders; every photo / cartoon key has an
IMAGE_BRIEFSentry.
The key strings
- Attached questions in video order (L01 … L05, S1 S2 S3): A B B A A B C B (B 4 of 8 = 50 %).
- L01 two-option y/n run: y y y n n n n (no four alternate; No 4 of 7 = 57 %); three-option 0 2 1 1.
- L02 three-option 0 0 2 1 2 0 1; two-option n y.
- L03 four-option (carrier set) 0 1 2 3 3; three-option 0 1 2; two-option n y.
- L04 three-option 1 0 1 2 1; two-option n n y y.
- L05 two-option (complete / gradual, then claims) c g g c g c · n n y → 0 1 1 0 1 0 1 1 0; rings L and P; three-option 0.
- Bank: see Counts. The fixed sets (C4 carriers; complete change / gradual growth sisters) are whitelisted from the single-longest-option check by name; the remaining single-longest keys (PP-1 "pollen", PP-5 "the wind", PP-14, PP-27, PP-50) are one-word or fixed-set keys where the distractors are the same kind of thing.
Design-check-sequence records
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Skill: design-check-sequence @ efd8fba
Part: L01 (LIF4-040) Type: (a) one-step categorisation — a scene is or is not pollination. Plan: 11 items; one Grade 3 recall (3 opt); one part item (3 opt); a y/n run of five (two carriers, three near misses); term recognition (3 opt); the pollen-is-seeds claim (y/n); the wheat apply item (3 opt). Belongs in practice/test: the typed "pollen" (PR-12, PP hard).
Part: L02 (LIF4-041) Type: (c) concept — a because-clause (pollen arrives, so seeds form). Plan: 10 items; recall (pollination); WHAT ×2 (pear; netted bean); WHY as FRQ on a fresh case (squash, Ohio — read against the apple orchard, the netted flower and the bean quiz item); the claim (flower makes seeds without pollen — No); a process item (what the joined part becomes); transfer (greenhouse shaking); a TRUE claim; where the plums grow; the term item last. Belongs in practice/test: the "how many melons" count, the hives claim by reason.
Part: L03 (LIF4-042) Type: (a) one-step categorisation on the carrier set, plus the why. Plan: 10 items; recall (seed); four carrier items keys 0 1 2 3; the why (3 opt); claim No; claim Yes; where-will-they-grow; the grape transfer (carrier set). Belongs in practice/test: the two-step sea-bean item; the no-way-to-travel claim by reason.
Part: L04 (LIF4-043) Type: (c) concept with an order routine inside it. Plan: 10 items; recall (what is packed in a seed); WHAT ×2 (corn in a drawer; peas in a cold basement); claims No ×2 (dark; soil), Yes ×2; the first part out (3 opt); ORDER first → last (last third); the term item last. Belongs in practice/test: typed water / warmth; the four-case sort.
Part: L05 (LIF4-044) Type: (a) one-step categorisation (complete change / gradual growth). Plan: 13 items; recall (chrysalis); six fixed-set items c g g c g c; two lettered rings from STAGE_SETS; ORDER (grasshopper); claims (every insect — No; two animals — No; puppy — Yes). Belongs in practice/test: which-of-four-animals; claims by reason; the four-stage rings.
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The example sequences, written out
- L01 (fact form): E the bee on the apple flower (pollen sticks, rubs off at the next flower) → E the wind on corn (no petals, no sweet juice, a yellow cloud) → the name. Frame on the two figures: "Pollen moves from this flower to the next flower, carried by <a bee / the wind>."
- L03 (one frame, four cards): "<The wind / Water / The dog / The bird> carries the seed away." — dandelion (tuft of hairs) → coconut (floats) → burr (hooks on fur) → berry (eaten, droppings). The verdict mark is the arrow on every card; no card is a non-example (every seed is carried).
- L05 (two frames, alternating, broken at the end by the sort table): "The young <X> looks nothing like the grown-up, and its body changes completely: this is a complete change." / "The young <X> looks like a small grown-up, and it just grows bigger: this is gradual growth." — butterfly (C) → grasshopper (G) → ladybug (C) → chicken (G) → frog (C) → dog (G); the sorting sentence "To sort a life cycle, ask one question: does the young look like a small grown-up?" comes before the rule. Near misses in the checks: the moth's cocoon (a soft case, still a complete change), the garter snake (gradual, not an insect), the kitten.
The rules applied
| Rule | Where | ||||||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Explain then label; coin as "when X, we call it Y" | pollen (L01 line 9), pollination (L01 "The name"), fertilization (L02 "The joining"), germination (L04), complete change / gradual growth (L05 frames) | ||||||
| A coined term is used from then on; one-line recap on first reuse | L02 opens "Pollination is pollen moving …"; L03–L05 use "seeds", "germinates"; L05 recaps the chrysalis line | ||||||
| Every sentence has a subject and a verb (S38 0 fragments) | the slogan rewritten; "Which part?" → a whole question; "And a dog." → "Now consider a frog and a dog." | ||||||
| Idea line ≤ 22 words, one sentence (S1 0) | four long lines split (L02 close, L03 burr, L05 ladybug and frog) | ||||||
| No figurative or purposive verb | "without meaning to", "carries", "starts to grow", "comes out"; no "delivers", "hitch-hikes", "wakes up", "parachutes" | ||||||
| Say the positive word | "most would die" (not "would not survive") | ||||||
| Connectives: so / because / But / If … | throughout the forest lines and whys | ||||||
| Units as words; numerals on screen | "two miles", "ten days"; chips carry no numbers | ||||||
| No "biggest / smallest" for a quantity (S39 0) | PP-35's "grows bigger every day" cut to "grows" | ||||||
| An option never bundles a verdict with its reason | every claim is bare yes / no, or "X is wrong … What is the correct reason?" with four single statements | ||||||
| The key carries no connective its distractors lack (S35 tell) | PP-20, 28, 43, 48 keys shortened to one clause | ||||||
| Lettered stems and drawings from one list; order keys run the stem's way | STAGE_SETS + stage_letter; check_lettered_items.py 0 mismatch; every order stem says "from first to last"; no reverse ask | ||||||
| Item blind text never states the answer | ring blind text lists what is drawn at each letter; grep of [Drawing: lines for first\ | next\ | last\ | young\ | adult\ | egg\ | order → 0 hits |
| Photo / cartoon placeholders with briefs; code draws what must be exact | 15 placeholders, 15 briefs; the cutaway, cards, strip, rings, tables and rule cards by code | ||||||
| No SVG ids (clipPath / marker) | arrowheads are polygons; check_svg_ids.py PASS, 0 ids | ||||||
| Names from the topic's row only | Zimmerman, Tamara, Zoey, Theodore — build_tools_names.py all free, exit 0 | ||||||
| US animals and places | Ohio, Georgia, Arizona, Florida; cardinal, raccoon, bear, fox, garter snake, alligator |
Misconceptions confronted, by name
The physics catalogue is silent on Life beliefs; the sources are the literature named per item (Driver, Squires, Rushworth and Wood-Robinson, Making Sense of Secondary Science, 1994; Russell and Watt, SPACE Growth report, 1990; AAAS Project 2061 assessment items on life cycles; Shepardson 1997 on children's ideas about insects).
| Belief | Lesson line that addresses it | Item |
|---|---|---|
| Pollen is the plant's seed | L01: pollen named on the stalks beside "the tiny parts where the seeds will form" | L01-q10 (Theodore, No) |
| A flower makes seeds on its own; pollen is decoration | L02: "There is no fertilization, so no seed forms"; the rule's last sentence | L02-q5 (Tamara, No); PP-11, PP-19, PP-23 |
| Seeds need light to germinate | L04: cup A sprouted in the dark cupboard | L04-q4 (Theodore, No); L04 attached; PR-7; PP-31; PP-46 (by reason) |
| A plant's food comes from the soil, so a seed needs soil | L04: "The tiny plant inside uses the food packed beside it, so it needs no light and no soil to start" | L04-q5 (Tamara, No) |
| A plant does best keeping its seeds close | L03: "Crowded and in the shade, most of the tiny plants would die" | L03-q7 (Zoey, No); PP-28; PP-43 (by reason) |
| A caterpillar and a butterfly are two different animals (Grade 3 confronted it) | L05: "The caterpillar is the young butterfly"; the chrysalis line | L05-q12 (Theodore, No); PP-48 (tadpole and frog, by reason) |
| Every insect changes completely like a butterfly | L05: the grasshopper frame | L05-q11 (Tamara, No); PP-49 (walking stick, by reason) |
Checker result, every WARN answered
python3 build_tools_check_topic.py grade4/topic37_build/content/G4T37.py → 0 FAIL, 80 WARN; grade4/check_g4_articles.py → 0 FAIL (four article WARNs above 300, answered under Questions for James).
- S8 beat carries 3 sentences (×5: L01 beat 1, L02 beats 1 and 6, L03 beat 1, L05 beat 4) — kept: each opening beat is scene + person + question, in three short sentences a voice reads as one breath; L02's rule beat is the lexicon sentence, three sentences long, spoken word for word.
- S10 scene word 'dusted' (L01-q8), 'hardly' (L02 FRQ) — kept: "dusted" and "hardly" are ordinary words, not scene objects; the squash hive bee and the Ohio squash garden are fresh scenes.
- S22 negative stem over negative options (L02-q3) — kept: the no-pollen case is the atom's own contrast; the stem was rewritten to "pollen never lands on it" and the options name what grows.
- S36, 73 unusual words (the whole list is in the checker output; the rulings):
- fine, taught or glossed on the page: petals / petal (named on the cutaway), germinate / pollinate / pollinates (the coined words' verb forms), stalk (the drawing's own word, "the little stalks"), grub (glossed "a soft white grub"), maggot (glossed), pod ("a pod grows around seeds"), tuft / tufts ("a tuft of fine hairs"), fluff / fluffy, hedge, mesh ("a tall mesh cage"), split, spun, sown, sprouting / sprouted, swollen, shrink, scatters, wriggles, spiky, uphill, burr / burrs (the lesson's own object, glossed "a seed case covered in tiny hooks"), kernel (popcorn), gale (one practice item, "a strong gale").
- US plants and animals a nine-year-old meets (the variety is the bank's freshness): holly, hazel, almond(s), raspberry / raspberries, cucumber(s), cantaloupe, melon(s), kiwi, avocado, yucca, sycamore, persimmon, oat, magnolia, marigolds, cockroach, mantis, mosquito, katydid, wasp, cicada, stink (bug), garter (snake).
- ask James: metamorphosis (said once; Questions for James).
- S30 typed = 6, fail 0, warn 0 (every accept list carries bare, article and child-spelling forms). S35 typed_long 0 (the long terms are in RECALL_BY_MCQ). S37 strand 0. S39 0. S38 0 fragments.
check_brief.py: one hit,G4T37-INTRO — closing: no closing screen text as short bullets (R79)— the standing accepted hit (an intro teaches nothing, so it has no rule slide and no bullets; James, 25 Sep 2026); every lesson and the summary ✓.- If the batch tool bans a word a lesson must say: none — the BANNED list (force, gravity, lift, leak, energy …) touches no line of this topic.
Bank freshness, re-performed
Scene nouns of every lesson, quiz, attached, intro and practice item: apple orchard hive beehive school garden corn dandelion park coconut burr dog holly cardinal robin pumpkin bean cup cupboard fridge shelf towel cage jar grasshopper ladybug chicken chick hen frog puppy cherry oak rose lily magnolia squash hummingbird sunflower wheat blueberry pear tomato greenhouse plum okra strawberry cottonwood cranberry maple grape peach pea radish beetle cricket snake maggot kitten moth cocoon mosquito cucumber bat cactus watermelon tumbleweed lettuce cockroach firefly orange mantis.
Grep of the bank (stems, options, whys): hits only on cup (the flower's "green cup", a part not a scene), garden ("garden pond", "garden bush"), bean (sea beans), lily (water lily), jar (a dry jar in the four-case sort), wheat (the four-case sort — L01-q11's wheat was a pollen scene, a different atom and move), pea (seeds glued to a card — a new scene kind), moth (yucca and primrose moths as pollinators; silkworm moth as an option), beetle (mealworm beetle as an option), frog and grasshopper (the two taught animals on rings and in claims — the register names them, and the brief asked for lettered-stage items on these cycles; recorded as a judgement call). The hives scene (L02) was found in two bank items and re-scened ("no bees fly"; "bees visit raspberry flowers"); the dry-jar-on-a-sunny-shelf option was moved to a windowsill.
Blind-text grep
python3 build_tools_blind_bundle.py … blind/2026-10-02 → 114 mcq, 6 text, 1 frq, 6 order; grep "[Drawing:" | grep -icw "first|next|last|young|adult|egg|order" → 0; the five drawing lines list only what is drawn at each letter (an oval on a leaf; a striped crawler; a pointed case on a twig; a four-winged insect; a small / middle-sized / bigger green jumper, wings only on the last; a cluster of clear balls; a round body with a wavy tail, with and without back legs; a squat body with four legs).
Figures (author self-check on the renders; the non-author review-figures pass is owed)
Rendered with headless Chrome and opened: flower_cut_labels, flower_seeds_form, pollen_path_bee, travel_cards, card_eaten, germ_strip, seedlings_crowded, seedlings_spaced, table_cups, rule_cycles, rule_fertilization, rings_pair, fruit_strip, sort_table_all, ring_butterfly, ring_grasshopper, q_ring_jklm, q_ring_npr, pp_ring_klmn, pp_ring_rstv. Fixed on the render: the cutaway's top label clipped (frame deepened); the rings' bottom arc clipped (frame deepened, glyphs enlarged); the bean roots crossed the card frame (shortened, scaled); the shade patch was invisible (a gray patch on the soil). The built page screenshotted at 900 px for every lesson's article route, L05's quiz and the bank: placeholders show their notes, figures sit inline, labels legible. check_svg_ids.py → PASS (0 ids).
Names run
python3 build_tools_names.py Zimmerman Tamara Zoey Theodore → all four "free", exit 0 (Topic 37's row in NAMES_POOL.md). No other name appears; the uncle and the grandmother are unnamed.
Sentence-atomise self-check (one table per paragraph, collapsed to the rows that changed)
Every idea line, headache, forest line, caption, fb, why and script beat was read against the fourteen rows. Rows that changed something: (2) four lines split at "and / so" (L02 close; L03 burr; L05 ladybug, frog); (4) "it" replaced by "the bee", "the tiny part", "the green cup" in L02; (5/6) "the bee delivers" never written — "pollen sticks … some rubs off"; "the seed travels" → "the wind carries the seed away"; (7) pollen, fertilization, germination each arrive after the plain event; (12) the L05 caterpillar description cut to one clause; (14) every idea line ≤ 22 words (S1 0), every spoken sentence with a verb (S38 0). The new-scene rule: every scene opens with its introducing sentence ("Here is one apple flower, cut down the middle."; "Zoey sets up three cups …"; "Now consider a ladybug, whose young …").
Judgement calls
- The frog as a complete change (above); the rider in L04; "metamorphosis" said once.
- "sweet juice" for nectar — nectar is not a Grade 3-5 word in the registers; "sweet juice" is what a nine-year-old says.
- The bank's two four-stage rings add a "tadpole with back legs" and a "bigger young grasshopper" stage that the lesson rings do not draw — both are true stages, drawn in the same glyph register, and the stems ask only for stages the lesson named (the tadpole with no legs; the first stage with wings).
- "Theodore says …" claims appear in both lesson quizzes and the bank (as in Topic 22); the children are the course's only licensed claim-makers.
- The practice set runs to 13, one over "about twelve", so that "pollen" and "seed" each get an MCQ offering the word before the typed item (S33).
- Grade 3's
fruit_paneldraws an apple, so L02's fruit strip is an apple strip although L02's scene is also apples — one depiction per thing outranks variety here.
Owed
- The blind read of
blind/2026-10-02/BLIND_BUNDLE_G4T37.mdby a reader who has not seen the keys;check_order_keys.pyon each reader file. - The non-author review-questions and review-figures passes; the review-accuracy pass (the frog call, the pollen "tiny part" simplification).
- The picture pass (15 placeholders) through David's pack — AFTER James's sign-off, since the record carries Questions for James.
- The video batch is built and checked and NOT sent (
handoff/G4T37/videos/READY.md): James's review of these scripts is the cue. - Vault-sync: no new general rule arose; the "No pollen, no seeds" slogan failing S38 is an instance of an existing rule, noted here only.
v2 — reviews applied (2 October 2026)
Skill: course-build → write-lesson (lesson lines, scripts) · write-mcqs (every item change; check_key_tells.py) · write-explanation (fb and why lines) · review-figures (author re-render after the drawer changes) @ e23b67f
In plain words. The blind read, the questions-and-accuracy review and the figure review of 2 October are applied in place. Two items that keyed on plants that pollinate themselves now use plants that do not (a zucchini, a gourd vine). The flower's seed place is said one way everywhere ("the tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup"). The item rings are redrawn so their letters read at about 18 px on a phone, every ring item asks for a stage by its name, the frog has four legs, the grasshopper's egg sits in the soil, and the eaten-seed card ends in droppings. Zoey replaces Tatum (two "Ta…a" girls on one page). L05 is shorter (the chicken case and the closing line cut). No key's letter or meaning changed except where a row below says so. Nothing is committed; the batch is rebuilt and checked and NOT sent.
#### Finding → change
| Finding (review) | Change made |
|---|---|
| Tatum / Tamara look alike (blind A, B; coordinator) | Tatum → Zoey in every content file, brief, alt, caption, checker hook, the names pool row and this record. Zoey has 0 hits in grade4/ grade3/ demos/ reviews/ handoff/ outside Topic 37 (Kayla, the first pick, turned out to be Topic 38's and was dropped — build_tools_names.py reads Grade 3 only, so its "free" is not proof for Grade 4). python3 build_tools_names.py Zimmerman Tamara Zoey Theodore → all free, exit 0. Grep for the old name in content, batch and this record → 0 (the three filed reviews keep their own words). |
| L01 green-cup line / L02 phrase / PP-09 (review, figure review) | L01: "At the bottom of the flower is a green cup." + "The tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup, are where the seeds will form."; L02 article, forest and script beat 3 say "deep inside, in the green cup"; terms["fertilization"] likewise; PP-09 key "the tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup", its three distractors written to the same fullness so the key is no longer the single longest. |
| "metamorphosis" line names both kinds; "in this course" (review) | L05: "Scientists call a complete change complete metamorphosis, and gradual growth incomplete metamorphosis." — said once, never tested, no meta. |
| No tadpole line (review) | L05: "The tadpole is the young frog, and it looks nothing like a frog."; the frog ring now sits beside it; script beat 4 says "The tadpole is the young frog". |
| Pumpkins flower in summer (review) | Intro beat 1 and blurb: "early summer". |
| Ladybug larvae are spotted (review) | "a small spiky crawler with no round red shell". |
| L05 too long (review, author's question 5) | Chicken case cut from the run and from the sort table (five rows); the closing line cut (it repeated the two frame lines). L05 article 335 words by the idea-line count (check_g4_articles.py 342 with captions); every script ≤ 150 (L05 exactly 150 after the tadpole words; the grasshopper beat lost "and grows bigger"). |
| L02-q3 beans self-pollinate (Essential) | Zucchini, as the review wrote it; key still the third option, "no zucchini and no seeds". |
| PP-19 bagged peppers set fruit (Essential) | A gourd vine; key still C, "Gourds grow only where the open flowers were." |
| PR-08 two defensible starts (Essential) | "A wildflower starts as a seed. Put these parts of its life in order, from first to last." |
| PP-40 "a honeydew" / "fruit" defensible (Essential) | "Type what the flower can now make inside it."; accept list widened (19 forms: seed / seeds with article, plural, "inside", child spellings); wrong_fb for fruit, honeydew, a honeydew, melon say "outside them". |
| L01-q11 wheat self-pollinates | A pecan tree. |
| L02-q7 shaking moves a flower's own pollen; key joined two clauses | A small soft brush moves pollen flower to flower; key "So the flowers can make seeds." |
| "bee means to help" has no item | New L01 claim: "Theodore says a bee goes into a flower in order to carry its pollen to the next flower. Is Theodore right?" — No; source Driver et al. 1994; lesson line "The bee does not mean to carry pollen". A TRUE twin from Tamara ("without meaning to" — Yes) keeps the lesson's claims from being all No (vault: at least one Yes-keyed claim per lesson). |
| L01-03..08 keys alternated in the bundle | The y/n run re-ordered: oak y · lily y · petals n · rain n · moth y · hive n · Theodore (purpose) n · Theodore (seeds) n · Tamara y → y y n n y n n n y, no four alternate, No 5 of 9. The term item (hummingbird) now sits LAST. L01-q5's beetle-on-magnolia was the summary's own attached scene, so it is now a moth on honeysuckle. |
| PP-38 key restates the stem | "a cicada's young, a small brown cicada with no wings". |
| L05-q7 stem states the verdict | "A moth's young is a caterpillar that spins a soft cocoon around itself. Which kind of life cycle is this?" |
| L03-q9 / L04-q1 / PP-27 / PP-43 single-longest keys | "farther down the river" · "food" (soil / food / water) · "space and light" · "Those seeds would crowd under the parent." |
| PP-20 "cold spring" defends "froze" | "One rainy spring…"; distractors: rain washed the flowers off / too much water / trees too young. |
| L05-01 cocoon defensible | "A butterfly's caterpillar … What is the caterpillar resting in its hard case called?" |
| PP-17 D taught purpose; key longest | "They hold a lot of sweet juice inside."; the other distractors written to the key's fullness. |
| L02-05/08 mirror pair; L02-03 on one page | q8 is a TRUE claim on a different feature (pollen must land on the sticky top first); q3 ⟂ q5 recorded in the check design and the type sheet (a lesson quiz is read in order on one page). |
| PP-33/34 odd one out by shape | Every option "<animal>, whose young is a <adj> <noun>"; the key differs by content only. |
| L05-08, PP-36 (and PP-35, PP-52) stems name the drawn feature | Asked by name: "Which letter marks the chrysalis / the young grasshopper / the caterpillar / the tadpole / the grown grasshopper?" The frog ring's third stage is now a young frog with a short tail (four legs), so "the tadpole" names one stage; check_lettered_items.py reads the by-name asks. |
| "sown", "gale" | planted / spread; a strong wind. |
| Figure must-fix 1: phone size | Item rings in a 320 × 320 frame, glyphs ×2.0 (1.6 × the old 1.25), 18-unit letters in 26-unit chips; measured on the built page in a forced 360 px iframe: chip box 25.5 px, letters ≈ 18 px (≥ 13). Teaching rings 420 wide with 14-unit names. Cutaway 420 wide with 15-unit labels (the headache form 300 wide). Pollen-path chips and card chips through a local bchip (13–14 units) in tighter frames (440, 510). Tables through a local table13 (Topic 18's drawer at 13-unit type, same measured columns and guard); the cups table's place words moved out of the cells, the sort table's header shortened. |
Must-fix 2: card_eaten | A berry with a bite out of it above the arrow; a small dark mound with pale seeds at the right. |
Must-fix 3: flower_cut_headache | 300-wide frame. |
| Must-fix 4: cutaway leaders | Pollen leader climbs from the right knob clear of the petal's top, then runs right; the sticky-top leader goes up then right; the seeds leader ends on the right-hand oval; the petal leader ends inside the petal. Two small sepal tips at the cup's rim (optional, added). |
Must-fix 5: g_frog | Two back legs and two front legs drawn; blind text "four legs, two back legs and two front legs". g_froglet adds a short tail. |
| Ring audit: grasshopper egg on a leaf | A soil-pod glyph (g_egg_soil, stage key "egg in soil", printed "egg" through LABELS). The chicken ring is deleted with the chicken case (it was referenced by no script). |
| Pollen-path arrow short | Ends at the next flower's upper petal. |
sort_table_headache unplaced | Deleted. |
| Video-only keys | figures.VIDEO_ONLY = card_wind, card_water, card_fur, card_eaten, ring_dog, rings_pair (ring_frog is now placed in L05). |
| Briefs: no eye-first line; cupboard letters; dandelion side | "The eye goes first to …" opens all 15 briefs; the cupboard brief has no letters (the towels' dampness tells the cups apart; letters drawn by code at the page stage if needed), its caption and alt follow; dandelion "to the right". |
| germ_strip shows no water / warmth | Caption: "A seed with water and warmth germinates: …". Seedling captions shortened so the in-figure text is not repeated. |
| Ring convention in the bundle | The item rings' blind text now says "arrows running clockwise round it from the stage at the top"; the bundle cutter itself prints no convention line (reported to the coordinator). |
| PP-46 "only water and warmth" | Air added to the simplification list: a seed also needs air; no item names it. |
#### Checker lines (after the changes)
python3 build_tools_check_topic.py grade4/topic37_build/content/G4T37.py→ 0 FAIL, 81 WARN (74 S36 words as before plusincomplete,gourd,project,craft— fine, taught or everyday; S8 ×5 and S10 ×2 kept as in v1; the L05 S8 beat is scene + two verdict sentences).python3 grade4/check_g4_articles.py …→ 0 FAIL; articles L01 317 · L02 307 · L03 282 · L04 309 · L05 342 (captions counted; 335 idea-line words); scripts 144 · 145 · 146 · 149 · 150; intro 116; summary 169.python3 build_tools_names.py Zimmerman Tamara Zoey Theodore→ all free, exit 0.check_svg_ids.py→ 47 figures, 0 ids, PASS.python3 grade4/topic37_build/check_lettered_items.py→ checked 11 lettered or order items — 0 mismatch.KEY TELLS: 0 of 116 MCQs flagged (a: 0, b: 0, c: 0)(42 fixed-set exempt).check_brief.py handoff/G4T37/videos/batch_G4T37.json→ 6 ✓, INTRO the standing R79 hit; batch rebuilt (7 videos), NOT sent.- Blind bundle
grade4/topic37_build/blind/2026-10-02-v2/→ 116 mcq, 6 text, 1 frq, 6 order;[Drawing:lines grep first|next|last|young|adult|egg|order → 0.
#### Key strings (v2)
L01 two-option y y n n y n n n y (0 0 1 1 0 1 1 1 0; No 5 of 9), three-option 0 2 1 1 · L02 three-option 0 0 2 1 2 0 1, two-option n y · L03 four-option 0 1 2 3 3, three-option 0 1 2, two-option n y · L04 three-option 1 0 1 2 1, two-option n n y y · L05 two-option c g g c g c n n y, rings L and P, three-option 0, four-option (ring) 2 · attached A B B A A B C B (unchanged) · bank MCQ A 10 · B 12 · C 12 · D 12 (unchanged).
#### Changed ids
L01: article lines 12–13, q3–q13 (order, the moth item, two new claims, pecan, term last; quiz now 13). L02: forest 2, article line "The joining", script beat 3, q3, q7, q8. L03: q9, two captions. L04: cupboard caption, germ-strip caption, q1. L05: article (ladybug, chicken cut, tadpole lines, frog ring placed, sort-table caption, metamorphosis line, closing line cut), script beats 3–4, q1, q7, q8, q9. Intro beat 1, blurb. PR-6, PR-7, PR-8. PP-9, 15, 17, 19, 20, 27, 29, 33, 34, 35, 36, 38, 40, 43, 52. Figures: every ring, the cutaway family, pollen paths, travel cards, both tables, the frog / froglet / egg-in-soil glyphs; deleted sort_table_headache, ring_chicken.
#### Judged differently, and why
- The frog ring's third bank stage is a young frog with a short tail, not "tadpole with back legs": with two tadpole stages, "which letter marks the tadpole?" has two answers. The toad ORDER item keeps "tadpole with back legs" (an order, not a ring).
- A Yes claim was added to L01 beside the asked-for No claim, so the lesson is not all-No and the two-option run stays under 60 % No.
- Tables are re-sized through a local
table13rather than by editing Topic 18's shared drawer, which other agents are building against tonight.
v3 — polish (2 October 2026)
Skill: course-build → write-mcqs (check_key_tells.py, one bank key trimmed) · write-like-james (the Needs-you page REVIEW_NEXT_G4T37.md) @ e23b67f
In plain words. Reader C re-read the whole v2 bundle cold (129 items: 116 MCQs, 6 typed, 1 written answer, 6 order) and agreed every key. Nothing was blocking. Three small notes came back; one is applied and two are left on purpose, with the reason here. No key's letter or meaning changed. No script line changed, so the video batch is not rebuilt (v2's handoff/G4T37/videos/batch_G4T37.json stands, checked, NOT sent). Nothing is committed.
#### The three notes
| Note (Reader C) | What was done | Why |
|---|---|---|
| PR-02 offers "spores" as a distractor, a word this topic never teaches | Left. | PR-02 is the topic's Grade 3 retrieval item for LIF3-071 (the comment on the item says so). Grade 3 Topic 37 teaches the word: its rule_spore card reads "A spore is a dust-like speck that a plant releases to grow a new plant", and its seed_vs_spore card sets A SEED: A PACKAGE against A SPORE: ONE SPECK (grep -i spore grade3/topic37_build/content/ → 20 hits). So "spores" is the sister word Grade 3 set against the seed, and the distractor the retrieval item should carry. The option's fb already restates the Grade 3 line. |
| PP-09's key, "the tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup", is the longest option by two words and the only one with a comma | Trimmed to "the tiny parts deep inside the green cup" (40 characters; the distractors are 43, 44 and 41). The why follows the key. | The key's comma was the real tell: no other option had one. The shorter form names the same place in the lesson's own words, in the same order; L01 and L02 keep the full phrase "deep inside, in the green cup", and Reader C already read PP-06's "the green cup at the bottom" and PP-09's "in the green cup" as one phrase. Key index 1 unchanged. |
| PP-36's ring: M (four legs, short tail) could pull a weaker student who reads the young frog as "a tadpole too" | Left, and recorded as a watch item for the live-data pass (triage-questions). | The stem asks for "the tadpole" by name, and L05's line is "Now consider a frog, whose tadpole has a tail and no legs." The strong reader picks L (round body, wavy tail, no legs); the why names M as "a young frog with four legs and a short tail". Giving the ring two tadpole stages was rejected in v2 because "the tadpole" would then name two letters. If live data shows M pulling, the fix is a stem that says "with no legs", which the figure review had asked to avoid (a stem naming the drawn feature). The draw constraint PP-36 ⟂ PP-47 ⟂ PP-48 stands. |
#### Checker lines (v3)
python3 ~/Documents/CourseBuilding-Vault/skills/write-mcqs/check_key_tells.py grade4/topic37_build/content/G4T37.py→KEY TELLS: 0 of 116 MCQs flagged (a: 0, b: 0, c: 0)(42 fixed-set exempt).python3 grade4/topic37_build/check_lettered_items.py→ checked 11 lettered or order items — 0 mismatch.python3 build_tools_check_topic.py grade4/topic37_build/content/G4T37.py→ 0 FAIL, 81 WARN (the same 81 as v2: S36 words, S8 ×5, S10 ×2, all answered above).python3 grade4/check_g4_articles.py grade4/topic37_build/content/G4T37.py→ 0 FAIL; articles 317 · 307 · 282 · 309 · 342; scripts 144 · 145 · 146 · 149 · 150; intro 116; summary 169; opener ok.python3 build_tools_build_topic_site.py grade4/topic37_build/content/G4T37.py /tmp/g4t37_p.html→ 5 lessons, 13 practice, 52 pp100, 47 figures.check_svg_ids.py content/figures.py→ 47 figures, 0 ids, PASS.python3 build_tools_names.py Zimmerman Tamara Zoey Theodore→ all four free, exit 0.- Blind bundle re-cut:
grade4/topic37_build/blind/2026-10-02-v3/→ 116 mcq, 6 text, 1 frq, 6 order, 129 held;[Drawing:lines grep first|next|last|young|adult|egg|order → 0. - Video batch: no script line changed; not rebuilt, not sent.
#### Changed ids (v3)
PP-9 (option B's text and the why; key index unchanged). The bank file's header comment (v3 line). records/TYPES_G4T37.md (v3 note). Nothing else.
#### Owed after v3
- James's read of
course_preview/review/REVIEW_NEXT_G4T37.html(six questions, one renamed child), then the picture pass (15 placeholders) through David's pack. - His notes on the scripts are the cue to send the seven-video batch.
- Watch item: PP-36's option M in live data.
The type sheet (sixteen types, one exemplar each, the bar list and the draw constraints)
Skill: course-build → write-mcqs → write-explanation, design-check-sequence @ efd8fba
Topic 37 — Life cycles of plants and animals — the PP100's question types, with their exemplars (v1, 2 October 2026)
In one line: 52 items, 46 four-option MCQs, 4 typed, 2 order; sixteen types; every item on exactly one atom; difficulty rises with the atom (LIF4-040 mostly easy; 044 medium and hard only). MCQ keys A 10 · B 12 · C 12 · D 12.
What this page is. James reads a bank as its question TYPES first (vault: A bank is reviewed as its question types first, one exemplar each). Under the Grade 4 standing brief the bank is built straight away (content/G4T37_pp100_bank.py); this sheet is the way in. Each type line says what the stem asks and what the options (or the accept list) are, and prints one exemplar in full below.
Rulings already applied. Four options on every bank MCQ (two fixed sets: the carrier set "the wind / water / an animal's fur / an animal that eats the fruit", word for word the lesson's four cards; the sister-term set for the two class words). The long coined words (pollination, fertilization, germination, complete change, gradual growth) are recalled by MCQ (RECALL_BY_MCQ); the typed keys are short closed words inside the lexicon (pollen, seeds, water, warmth). Claims are bare yes / no or "X is wrong … What is the correct reason?" with four single statements. Every lettered ring reads its letters from ONE list (figures.STAGE_SETS); every order key runs first → last, the stem's way.
The bar list (real things a generated item must never use): no flower part by its name (stamen, anther, stigma, ovary, ovule — grades 6-8); no "nectar" (the course says "sweet juice"); no "larva", "nymph", "pupa" or "metamorphosis" in an item; no self-pollinating plant as a no-pollen case; no dragonfly, mayfly or salamander in a sort (their young are debatable at this grade); no rattlesnake or other animal whose life-cycle claim a child could dispute; no animal from outside the US; no scene from the lessons, quizzes, intro or practice (the list is in the build record).
The sixteen types
| Type | Items | Atom | Tier | Form | The stem asks… | The options / the accept | Exemplar scene |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 5 | 040 | easy, medium | MCQ | what the yellow dust is; which part pollen must reach; which part it came from; what carries it for a petal-less flower; what is true of a wind-pollinated flower | pollen / seeds / sap / soil; flower parts; carriers; four statements | a tulip; a hazel tree; a skunk cabbage and a fly; ragweed |
| 2 | 4 | 040 | easy, medium | MCQ | which of four scenes is pollination; what carried the pollen | four one-sentence scenes (one is pollen reaching another flower) | a yucca moth; ragweed; clover bees (one to the hive, one to the next flower); evening primrose moths |
| 3 | 1 | 040 | hard | typed | the name of the yellow dust | pollen, the pollen, child spellings | a bee on a cotton flower |
| 4 | 4 | 041 | easy | MCQ | what a flower can do once pollen lands; which part grows into the seeds; what grows where a pollinated flower was; how many seeds a flower with no pollen makes | make seeds / more pollen / new petals / a root; parts; outcomes; none / one / a few / hundreds | a kiwi; a lemon; a cantaloupe; an avocado |
| 5 | 2 | 041 | medium | MCQ | where fruit grows when half the flowers are bagged; how many melons from three pollinated flowers of ten | four outcomes; none / three / seven / ten | a pepper plant; a melon vine |
| 6 | 2 | 041 | medium | MCQ | the reason for very few fruits | four single reasons | almond trees in a cold spring; a lone pawpaw in Arizona |
| 7 | 2 | 044 | hard | MCQ keyed on the term | which words name the kind of life cycle, from its whole definition | complete change / gradual growth / pollination / germination (sisters) | the definition |
| 8 | 2 | 041 | medium, hard | MCQ; typed | the name of the joining; what the flower can now make (typed) | pollination / germination / fertilization / gradual growth; seeds, seed, a seed … | the definition; a honeydew flower |
| 9 | 5 | 042 | easy, medium | MCQ, the carrier set | what carries a described seed away | the wind / water / an animal's fur / an animal that eats the fruit | milkweed; water lily; bear and blackberries; raccoon; sycamore |
| 10 | 3 | 042 | medium | MCQ | how seeds got along a fox's path; what a far-landing seed gets; what happens to young trees under the parent | four outcomes | persimmons and a fox; cattail; hickory nuts |
| 11 | 5 | 043 | easy, medium | MCQ | which two things seeds need; which part comes out first; what a cold pot lacked; which of four seeds germinates; what happens under straw | water and warmth …; parts; water / warmth / sunlight / soil; four cases | lawn grass; popcorn; marigolds in a garage; wheat in four places; rice under straw |
| 12 | 2 | 043 | hard | typed | the one thing missing (water; warmth) | water, wet, moisture …; warmth, warm, heat … | peas glued to a card; zinnias in a cold cellar |
| 13 | 6 | 041, 042, 043, 044 | hard | MCQ | a named child's claim is wrong — what is the correct reason; a two-step prediction | four single-statement reasons; four places | raspberry bees; sea beans; seeds with no way to travel; sunlight before a seed starts; tadpole and frog; a walking stick's young |
| 14 | 4 | 044 | medium | MCQ | which of four animals has a complete change / gradual growth; which young looks like a small grown-up; which animal shares the alligator's kind | four animals, each with its young described in one clause | june bug; stink bug; lizard; cicada |
| 15 | 3 | 044 | medium, hard | MCQ, drawn ring | which letter marks a described stage | the ring's four letters (M N P R; K L M N; R S T V) | a butterfly ring; a frog ring with a legged tadpole; a four-stage grasshopper ring |
| 16 | 2 | 043, 044 | medium, hard | order | the stages first → last | four stages | an oat seed germinating; a toad |
Hard because — type 3 / 8 / 12: the word is produced, not picked. Type 7: the term from its whole definition among sisters. Type 13: a claim judged by its correct reason, which needs the lesson's idea held against the belief (the one-animal idea against "two animals"; the gradual-growth frame against "every insect"); the sea beans chain two ideas (an air-filled coat floats → water carries → lands along the coast). Type 15's hard ring: the wings come last, so the winged glyph must be found among three wingless ones. Type 16's toad: a half-changed stage placed between the tadpole and the toad.
One exemplar per type, in full
Type 1 (easy, LIF4-040). Inside a tulip, the little stalks around the middle end in knobs covered in yellow dust. What is the yellow dust called? — pollen / seeds / sap / soil. Why: The yellow dust on a flower's little stalks is called pollen. The tulip's knobs are covered in that yellow dust. So the dust is pollen. (nearest lesson-side instance: L01-q2, the cherry flower's part; here the name, on a tulip)
Type 2 (easy, LIF4-040). Which of these is pollination? — A moth carries pollen from one yucca flower into another. / Rain washes pollen off a flower onto the ground below it. / The wind blows a flower's petals into a garden pond. / A bee carries sweet juice from a flower back to its hive. (nearest: L01's y/n run, one scene per item; here four scenes in one item)
Type 3 (hard, LIF4-040, typed). A bee crawls out of a cotton plant's flower with yellow dust on its legs and carries the dust to the next flower. Type the name of the yellow dust. — accept pollen, the pollen, polen, pollin, pollon, pollen dust, polin, pollan. (nearest: PR-12, an orange tree; here cotton)
Type 4 (easy, LIF4-041). Pollen lands on the sticky top of a kiwi flower. What can that flower now do? — make more pollen / grow new petals / make seeds / grow a new root. (nearest: L02-q2, a pear flower)
Type 5 (medium, LIF4-041). A grower covers half the flowers on a pepper plant with small paper bags before any insect can reach them, and leaves the other half open. What happens by the end of summer? — Peppers grow only where the bagged flowers were. / Peppers grow where every flower was. / Peppers grow only where the open flowers were. / No peppers grow at all. (nearest: L02-q3, one netted bean flower; here half a plant, a comparison)
Type 6 (medium, LIF4-041). One cold, rainy spring, no bees fly for the two weeks the almond trees are in flower, and that fall the farm picks very few almonds. What is the reason? — The rain washed the flowers off the trees. / Cold stops almond trees from making any flowers. / The young almonds froze on the branches. / Hardly any pollen reached the almond flowers. (nearest: L02's FRQ, squash with no bees; here the reason is picked, on a tree crop)
Type 7 (hard, LIF4-044). Which words name the kind of life cycle in which the young looks nothing like the grown-up and its body changes completely? — gradual growth / complete change / pollination / germination. (nearest: L05's fixed-set items, which give a case; here the definition only)
Type 8 (hard, LIF4-041, typed). Pollen reaches a honeydew flower and joins with its inside part. Type what the flower can now make. — accept seeds, seed, a seed, its seeds, the seeds, new seeds, seads, seeeds, sedes, seedes. (nearest: L02-q2 picks "make seeds"; here produced)
Type 9 (easy, LIF4-042). A bear eats a bush full of blackberries and walks two miles into the woods before the seeds come out in its droppings. What carries the seeds away? — the wind / water / an animal's fur / an animal that eats the fruit. (nearest: L03-q5, a cardinal and holly berries)
Type 10 (medium, LIF4-042). A persimmon tree stands alone in a field, yet young persimmon trees come up along a fox's path through the woods each year. How did the seeds get there? — The wind blew the whole fruit along the path. / Rain water floated the seeds along the path. / The seeds came out in a fox's droppings. / The seeds rolled there by themselves. (nearest: L03-q9, floating seeds along a river; here the carrier is inferred from where the young trees are)
Type 11 (medium, LIF4-043). Which of these seeds will germinate? — a wheat seed in a dry jar on a warm windowsill / a wheat seed on a damp cloth in a cold freezer / a wheat seed in a dry jar in a warm, dark box / a wheat seed on a damp cloth in a warm, dark box. (nearest: L04's three cups, one at a time; here four cases sorted in one item)
Type 12 (hard, LIF4-043, typed). Zinnia seeds on a damp cloth sit in a cold cellar all winter, and none of them germinate. Type the one thing the seeds were missing. — accept warmth, warm, heat, being warm, warmness, a warm place, warm air, warmpth, wormth, warmeth, warmnes. (nearest: L04-q3 picks "warmth"; here produced)
Type 13 (hard, LIF4-044). Tamara is wrong when she says a young walking stick insect must turn into something that looks nothing like a walking stick before it is grown. What is the correct reason? — A walking stick has no young at all. / Every insect's young looks like a small grown-up. / A walking stick is not an insect. / Its young looks like a small grown-up. (nearest: L05-q11, the bare yes / no on "every insect"; here the reason, on a new insect)
Type 14 (medium, LIF4-044). Which of these animals has a life cycle of complete change? — a katydid, whose young looks like a small katydid / a horse, whose foal looks like a small horse / a june bug, whose young is a fat white grub / a duck, whose duckling looks like a small duck. (nearest: L05's two-option sorts, one animal each; here one of four)
Type 15 (medium, LIF4-044, drawn ring pp_ring_klmn). This ring shows a frog's life cycle, with its stages marked K, L, M, N. Which letter marks the stage with a tail and no legs at all? — K / L / M / N. Blind text: a ring of 4 stages with arrows running round it; at K: a cluster of six small clear balls with a dark dot in each; at L: a round dark green body with a wavy tail and no legs; at M: a round dark green body with a wavy tail and two small back legs; at N: a squat dark green body with four legs. (nearest: L05-q8 and q9, the butterfly and grasshopper rings)
Type 16 (hard, LIF4-044, order). Put the stages of a toad's life in order, from first to last. — eggs in the pond → tadpole → tadpole with back legs → toad. (nearest: PR-3, the frog's three stages; here four, with the half-changed stage)
Draw constraints (⟂) for the test builder
- PP-6 (the dust came from the little stalks) ⟂ PP-1 (the dust is called pollen): PP-1's key word sits in PP-6's stem.
- PP-22 (the joining is called fertilization) ⟂ PP-40 (typed: what the flower can now make — "seeds"): PP-22's stem says "where a seed can form".
- PP-50 and PP-51 (the two class words from their definitions) ⟂ every type-14 item on the same draw, and ⟂ each other.
- PP-16 (the root comes out first) ⟂ PP-32 (the oat seed order).
- PP-36 (frog ring, the tadpole) ⟂ PP-47 (the toad order) ⟂ PP-48 (tadpole and frog, by reason).
- The two typed need items (PP-44 water, PP-45 warmth) ⟂ PP-29 (the cold garage pot: "warmth") and PP-15 (water and warmth).
Items changed at review (v2, 2 October 2026)
PP-9 key "the tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup" (distractors equalised) · PP-15 "spread" · PP-17 D "They hold a lot of sweet juice inside." (no purpose; distractors equalised) · PP-19 a gourd vine (peppers self-pollinate) · PP-20 "One rainy spring" (no "cold"; new distractors) · PP-27 "space and light" · PP-29 "planted" · PP-33 / PP-34 every option "whose young is a …" · PP-35 / PP-36 / PP-52 asked by name (the caterpillar; the tadpole; the grown grasshopper) — the frog ring's third stage is a young frog with a short tail, so "the tadpole" names one stage · PP-38 "a small brown cicada with no wings" · PP-40 "Type what the flower can now make inside it", accept list 19 forms · PP-43 "Those seeds would crowd under the parent." Bar list additions: no self-pollinating plant as a no-pollen case (beans, peas, peppers, tomatoes, wheat, oats). Simplification list: a seed also needs air (PP-46 says only water and warmth). Draw constraint added: the item rings' blind text states the convention "arrows running clockwise from the stage at the top". Zoey replaces Tatum as the third child.
Items changed at polish (v3, 2 October 2026)
PP-9 key "the tiny parts deep inside the green cup" (the comma cut; it was the only option with one; the distractors are within four characters of the key). Reader C's PR-02 and PP-36 notes are answered in the build record's v3 section and left as built. Key-tell checker after the change: KEY TELLS: 0 of 116 MCQs flagged.
The guidance, questions and accuracy review (2 October 2026)
Skill: course-build → review-lesson (Roles B, B2) · review-questions · review-accuracy @ fb37d14 — non-author review, filed by the coordinator from the reviewer's report
Topic 37 — guidance, questions and accuracy review, 2 October 2026
The topic teaches the right things in the right order and the record's claims hold — but two items key on a biology the plant itself refutes. Beans and peppers pollinate themselves, so a netted bean flower still makes a pod and bagged pepper flowers still make peppers; L02-q3 and PP-19 reward a false prediction and must change plant. Everything else is wording: PR-08 and PP-40 (blind read) still stand, five key tells, one meta line, "metamorphosis" said imprecisely.
Key-tell checker: KEY TELLS: 5 of 114 MCQs flagged (a: 5, b: 1, c: 0) — L02-q7, L03-q9, L04-q1, PP-27, PP-43.
PP-09 ruling. The lesson says one place three times ("inside a green cup, the tiny parts where the seeds will form"); the cutaway draws the seed parts inside the cup; no sepals drawn or named. Within the course "the green cup" is the swollen base — true for an apple. Not a confirmed error; Worth fixing: L01 → "At the bottom of the flower is a green cup. Deep inside it are the tiny parts where the seeds will form."; PP-09 key → "the tiny parts deep inside the green cup".
Essentials
L02-q3 (netted bean) and PP-19 (bagged pepper): self-pollinating plants as the no-pollen case — change the plant. PR-08: anchor the stem. PP-40: ask for what forms inside.
Worth fixing
L01-q11 wheat → pecan; L02-q7 tomato shaking moves its own pollen → a brush flower to flower; "Scientists call a complete change metamorphosis, and in this course we say…" → "complete metamorphosis" / "incomplete metamorphosis", no meta; the tadpole line; a "bee means to help" item; pumpkins flower in summer; ladybug larvae spotted; PP-38 key restates the stem; L05-q7's stem states the verdict; the five key tells.
Leave
PR-02 "spores" (Grade 3 Topic 37 taught it); PR-05 watermelon (seedless still needs pollen; the stem stipulates); L05-q1 cocoon (stem says "hard case"); PP-46 "only water and warmth" (air omitted — add to the omitted list); Topic 34's rider a faithful paraphrase; Tamara/Tatum (coordinator rules a rename: Tatum → a free name).
Author's questions: 1 keep the tested words, say "complete metamorphosis" and once "incomplete metamorphosis" (Florida SC.4.L.16.4 is assessed in those words), never tested. 2 coin "fertilization" — yes. 3 keep the frog. 4 keep the rider. 5 keep L01/L02/L04 whole; trim L05 to ~330 (cut the chicken case from the run; the duplicated closing line).
| where | finding | rule broken | severity | the rewrite |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| L02-q3 | beans self-pollinate | real organism survives the claim | Essential | "A zucchini flower is wrapped in a fine net all spring, so pollen never lands on it. What grows where that flower was?" — a zucchini with seeds inside / a zucchini with no seeds inside / no zucchini and no seeds |
| PP-19 | bagged peppers set fruit | same; type sheet's bar list | Essential | "A grower covers half the flowers on a gourd vine with small paper bags before any insect can reach them, and leaves the other half open. What happens by the end of summer?" key "Gourds grow only where the open flowers were." |
| PR-08 | a cycle has no first | two defensible | Essential | "A wildflower starts as a seed. Put these parts of its life in order, from first to last." |
| PP-40 | "a honeydew" defensible | typed only where closed | Essential | "Pollen reaches a honeydew flower and joins with its inside part. Type what the flower can now make inside it." |
| L01-q11 | wheat self-pollinates | real organism | Worth fixing | "A pecan tree's flowers have no bright petals and make no sweet juice. What carries pollen from one pecan tree to the next?" |
| L02-q7 | own pollen; key joins clauses | course against itself; key tell | Worth fixing | "…the grower touches each flower with a small soft brush, so pollen moves from flower to flower onto the sticky tops. Why?" key "So the flowers can make seeds." |
| L05 art. line 31 | "metamorphosis" names both; "in this course" | specific thing; no meta | Worth fixing | "Scientists call a complete change complete metamorphosis, and gradual growth incomplete metamorphosis." |
| L05 frog line | no tadpole line | misconception met by a line | Worth fixing | "The tadpole is the young frog." |
| L01 quiz (new item) | "bee means to help" has no item | misconception met by an item | Worth fixing | "Theodore says a bee goes into a flower in order to carry its pollen to the next flower. Is Theodore right?" No |
| L01 line 12 / PP-09 | "green cup" | one word for one thing | Worth fixing | as ruled above |
| intro beat 1, blurb | pumpkins flower in summer | real organism | Worth fixing | "Here's Tatum's [renamed] backyard in early summer." |
| L05 ladybug line | larvae spotted | real organism | Worth fixing | "a small spiky crawler with no round red shell" |
| PP-38 | key repeats the stem | stem never names its answer | Worth fixing | "a cicada's young, a small brown cicada with no wings" |
| L05-q7 | stem states "changes completely" | stem names its answer | Worth fixing | "A moth's young is a caterpillar that spins a soft cocoon around itself. Which kind of life cycle is this?" |
| L03-q9 / L04-q1 / PP-27 / PP-43 | key the single longest | key tells | Worth fixing | "farther down the river" · "food" (soil / food / water) · "space and light" · "Those seeds would crowd under the parent." |
| L02-07, L01-03..08, PP-20, PP-17 D, L02-05/08 + L02-03, PP-33/34, "sown", "gale" | blind read | — | Worth fixing | as the blind-read table rules |
The figure review (2 October 2026)
Skill: review-figures @ fb37d14 — non-author figure review with the page pass, filed by the coordinator from the reviewer's report
Topic 37 — figure review, 2 October 2026
What a student notices first: the pages are clean and calm — one cut-open flower that recurs four times with the same shape, two pink flowers with a dotted arrow between them, four identical seed-travel cards, a four-card bean strip with no Sun, five life-cycle rings that all turn the same way. On a phone every label shrinks to 5–8 px; the item rings' letters are 6 px.
Must fix before a cold read
- Phone size (278 px column, measured before the builder change c30858e — re-measure): item-ring letters 6.0 px; cutaway labels 7.5; teaching-ring names 7.3; pollen-path chips 5.8; travel-card chips 5.1; germ-strip numerals 5.0; tables 5.6. Item rings in a 320-unit frame (content now 63 % of 460) with 18–20-unit letter chips and glyphs ×1.6; cutaway, travel cards and tables larger type or tighter frames.
card_eatendroppings are three pale dots; the carrier sign is a second berry. Draw a small dark mound with pale seeds in it.flower_cut_headacheframe two-thirds empty. 300-wide frame.- Cutaway pointers: "pollen: yellow dust" enters through the right petal; "where the seeds form" ends on the cup wall, not an oval. Reroute; end on the middle oval.
g_frogshows two legs; blind text says "four legs" (pp_ring_klmn, ring_frog). Draw two each side or change the text.
PP-09 / cutaway ruling
Neither the drawing nor the item is wrong: for an apple flower the apple grows from the green base below the petals and the sepals are small points at its rim (not drawn); the ovals sit inside that cup on every render. Make item and L02 use one phrase ("the tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup"). Optional: two small green sepal tips at the rim.
Page pass
Every placed figure renders on its page as alone; no clipping or overlap; placeholders show notes. check_svg_ids.py: 49 figures, 0 ids, PASS. Bbox: 0 out-of-frame, 0 text overlaps. check_lettered_items.py: 11 items, 0 mismatch.
Ring audit
All clockwise from the top, one arrow style, no word labels on item stages. ring_butterfly PASS · ring_grasshopper PASS (egg-on-leaf glyph reused — grasshopper eggs sit in soil; a soil-pod glyph) · ring_frog direction PASS, glyph FAIL · ring_dog PASS · ring_chicken PASS (hen's egg on a leaf) · the five item rings PASS letters match stems; tadpole stages honest. Every item ring is the teaching ring with letters, egg at the top — answerable from position; acceptable while the convention stays. The page never states "clockwise from the top" (arrows carry it); the bundle cutter should print it once per ring item. L05-08 ("hard case") and PP-36 ("tail and no legs") stems name the drawn feature — ask by name ("which letter marks the chrysalis / the tadpole?").
Unplaced (9)
card_wind, card_water, card_fur, card_eaten, ring_frog, ring_dog, ring_chicken, rings_pair — video-only, keep and mark. sort_table_headache — delete or place beside the L05 question. Suggest ring_frog in L05 beside the frog paragraph.
Briefs, minor
All 15 briefs have who/what/where, No text, style; none has an eye-first line; dandelion's "to one side" names no side; cupboard_cartoon asks for letters A B C (text in a rendered picture — risky); hoppers_photo hard to source. Pollen-path arrow ends short of the second flower; germ_strip shows no water/warmth (the table carries them — caption note); seedling in-figure captions repeat the page caption. Grade 3 imports appear as drawn. Captions never say "real".
| key | kind | used by | verdict | what is wrong | the fix |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| flower_cut_headache | svg | L01 | FIX | frame 2/3 empty | 300-wide frame |
| flower_cut_labels, flower_pollen_on_top, flower_seeds_form | svg | L01, L02 | FIX | leaders; 7.5 px labels | reroute; bigger type |
| pollen_path_bee / _wind | svg | L01 | minor | arrow short; chips 5.8 px | end at flower; larger chip |
| fruit_strip | svg (G3) | L02 | PASS | — | — |
| travel_cards; card_eaten | svg | L03; video | FIX | droppings as dots; chips 5.1 px | mound with seeds; larger chips |
| card_wind/water/fur | svg | video | PASS | unplaced | mark video-only |
| seedlings_crowded / _spaced | svg | L03 | PASS | duplicate caption | optional |
| germ_strip | svg | L04 | PASS | water/warmth not drawn | caption note |
| table_cups, sort_table_all | svg | L04, L05 | minor | 5.6 px | larger type |
| sort_table_headache | svg | none | DELETE/PLACE | unused | — |
| rule_* ×5 | svg | L01–L05 | PASS | 6–7 px | shared drawer |
| ring_butterfly, ring_grasshopper | svg | L05 | PASS | names 7.3 px; egg glyph | soil-pod glyph |
| ring_frog | svg | video | FIX | two legs vs text | glyph |
| ring_dog, ring_chicken, rings_pair | svg | video | PASS | unplaced; hen egg on leaf | mark video-only |
| q_ring_jklm, q_ring_npr; pp_ring_mnpr, pp_ring_klmn, pp_ring_rstv | item | L05 quiz; PP-35/36/52 | FIX | letters 6 px; frame 63 %; frog glyph | 320 frame, 18–20 chips |
| 10 photo_ph, 5 cartoon_ph | ph | L01–L05 | PASS | eye-first line | add |
Best: germ_strip; travel_cards; ring_butterfly. Weakest: card_eaten; flower_cut_headache; the item rings at phone width.
The blind read: two readers (2 October 2026)
Skill: course-build → review-lesson (Role A blind key read, two readers; Role C adjudication by the coordinator) @ fb37d14
Topic 37 — Life cycles of plants and animals — blind read, 2 October 2026
Every MCQ key agreed by two blind readers (112 and 122 rows; MCQ disagreements 0); the order items matched on text; typed pollen / seed(s) / water / warmth on list. The three big ideas hold across the bundle: no pollen → no seeds and no fruit; germination needs water and warmth and never light; young that looks like a small grown-up → gradual growth. No item gives the bee or the plant a motive. Lettered stems match their rings.
Flags carried into the fix pass
| Item | Who | Flag | Ruling |
|---|---|---|---|
| PR-08 | A, B | five-stage wildflower order with no anchor — two defensible starts | stem names the start: "Start with the seed germinating." |
| PP-40 (typed) | A, B | "a honeydew" / "fruit" as right as "seeds" | stem "what the flower can now make inside it", accept list widened |
| L02-07 | A, B | key the only option with a comma and "and" | "So the flowers can make seeds." |
| L01-03..08 | A | yes/no keys A B A B A B | re-order |
| PR-05 | B | seedless watermelons exist | change the plant |
| L05-01 | A, B | "cocoon" defensible unless the lesson draws the hard-case line; the stem asks what the caterpillar is called | stem names the hard case and "butterfly"; or ask for the stage |
| PR-02 | A, B | "spores" unmet | a taught distractor |
| PP-20 | B | "cold spring" lets a child defend "the young almonds froze" | drop "cold" |
| PP-09 | A, B | key "the tiny parts in the green cup" only by elimination; L02 says "deep inside" | lesson and item say one place |
| L05-07 stem says "changes completely"; L01-02 key echoes "yellow"; PP-17 key longest; L02-05/08 mirror pair + L02-03 on one page; PP-33/34 odd-one-out by shape | B | give-aways and tells | re-word; checker to zero; ⟂ constraints |
| Tamara / Tatum | A, B | two "Ta…a" girls on the same pages | rename Tatum to a free name; NAMES_POOL row |
| ring convention not stated in the bundle; order options unlettered | A, B | tooling | bundle cutter prints the convention line and letters order options (coordinator) |
| "sown", "gale" | B | hard words | plainer |
| PP-17 D "sweet juice for bees" | B | teaches purpose as a distractor | re-word |
Readers' files: blind/2026-10-02/READER_A.md, READER_B.md.
Reader C's full re-read of the v2 bundle (2 October 2026)
Skill: review-lesson @ e23b67f (Role A — blind key reader, Reader C, cold read of v2 bundle only)
Takeaway
Every item has exactly one option I would defend, and I could answer all 120 from the lessons' plain words alone. The v1 worries are settled: the netted zucchini (L02-03) and the bagged gourd (PP-19) are both insect-pollinated plants, so "no fruit, no seeds" and "gourds only where the open flowers were" are the honest keys. The three rings ask by name and their pictures describe only what a student would see (a pointed case, a crawler, a round body with a wavy tail, a jumper with a wing), so the drawing never hands over the stage. Germination is one story everywhere: water and warmth, no light, no soil (L04-02/04/05/06/V-01, PR-07, PP-15/30/31/44/45/46). The two sorts each have one honest bin. No item says the bee means to carry pollen or that the plant wants anything; L01-09 and L01-11 test that very misconception and key against it. "The green cup at the bottom" is one phrase (L01-02, PP-06) and PP-09 shortens it to "in the green cup" without changing it. Tamara, Zoey and Theodore start with different letters and sounds; no nine-year-old merges them. Three small notes, none blocking: PR-02 names "spores" as a distractor (a word the topic never teaches), PP-09's key is the longest option by two words, and PP-36's M (four legs, short tail) could be read by a weaker student as "a tadpole too", though a strong one picks L.
Items
| id | answer | one-line note |
|---|---|---|
| L01-01 | B | A, C absurd; clean. |
| L01-02 | C | A, B tempting-wrong; "little stalks with yellow knobs" is the lesson's plain name. |
| L01-03 | A | Wind, flower to flower; yes. |
| L01-04 | B | Yes; two lilies named. |
| L01-05 | B | Petals, not pollen; no. |
| L01-06 | B | Pollen to soil, not to a flower; no. |
| L01-07 | B | Yes; moth carries pollen flower to flower. |
| L01-08 | B | No second flower, so no pollination; clean. |
| L01-09 | A | No; the bee goes in for sweet juice — this item tests the intention myth, good. |
| L01-10 | B | No; pollen is not seeds. |
| L01-11 | B | Yes; "without meaning to" is the lesson's line. |
| L01-12 | C | Wind; no petals, no juice is the cue. |
| L01-13 | A | Pollination; B, C tempting-wrong terms from the topic. |
| L01-V-01 | B | Pollen; clean. |
| L02-01 | C | Pollination; A is the tempting-wrong sibling term. |
| L02-02 | A | Make seeds; clean. |
| L02-03 | C | Zucchini is bee-pollinated; a netted flower makes no fruit and no seeds — honest. |
| L02-04 | Without bees, almost no pollen moved from flower to flower onto the sticky tops, so most flowers could not make seeds, and no squash grew where those flowers were. | Scorer awards: pollen not carried → no seeds → no squash. |
| L02-05 | B | No; clean. |
| L02-06 | A | A seed; clean. |
| L02-07 | A | So the flowers can make seeds; brush = the insect's job, clear. |
| L02-08 | A | Yes; clean. |
| L02-09 | B | Where the flowers were; clean. |
| L02-10 | A | Fertilization; C is the tempting-wrong sibling. |
| L02-V-01 | B | No strawberry, no seeds; honest for strawberry. |
| L03-01 | B | The seed; clean. |
| L03-02 | C | Wind; fluff is the cue. |
| L03-03 | C | Water; clean. |
| L03-04 | C | Fur; hooks are the cue. |
| L03-05 | A | Animal that eats the fruit; droppings named. |
| L03-06 | A | Space and light; B, C absurd. |
| L03-07 | A | No; clean. |
| L03-08 | B | Yes; clean. |
| L03-09 | A | Farther down the river; clean. |
| L03-10 | A | Animal that eats the fruit; sweet flesh is the cue. |
| L03-V-01 | B | Wind; clean. |
| L04-01 | A | Food; clean. |
| L04-02 | B | Seeds start to grow in the dark; C is the light myth. |
| L04-03 | C | Warmth; clean. |
| L04-04 | B | No; consistent with L04-02. |
| L04-05 | A | No; the food is inside the seed (L04-01). |
| L04-06 | A | Yes; dark closet, damp, warm. |
| L04-07 | A | Yes. |
| L04-08 | C | The root first. |
| L04-09 | a bean seed in damp soil; the root comes out; the shoot comes up; the first leaves open | First to last as asked. |
| L04-10 | A | Germination; clean. |
| L04-V-01 | A | Yes; no light needed. |
| L05-01 | A | Chrysalis; C cocoon is the honest tempting-wrong (moth, L05-07). |
| L05-02 | B | Complete change; grub looks nothing like the beetle. |
| L05-03 | A | Gradual growth. |
| L05-04 | B | Gradual growth. |
| L05-05 | A | Complete change. |
| L05-06 | A | Gradual growth. |
| L05-07 | B | Complete change. |
| L05-08 | A | L is the pointed case = chrysalis; description shows the case, not the name; L05-01's stem on the same page does describe a chrysalis as a hard case on a twig, which helps but is the taught fact. |
| L05-09 | A | P, the small jumper with no wings; honest, needs the taught "young has no wings". |
| L05-10 | egg in soil; young grasshopper; grown grasshopper | First to last. |
| L05-11 | B | No; crickets and grasshoppers. |
| L05-12 | A | No; same animal. |
| L05-13 | B | Yes. |
| L05-V-01 | A | Complete change. |
| SUMMARY-01 | C | Pollination. |
| SUMMARY-02 | A | Germination; dark box consistent. |
| SUMMARY-03 | A | Gradual growth. |
| PR-01 | B | In the flowers. |
| PR-02 | C | Seeds; "spores" (A) is a word the topic never teaches — unmet distractor, minor. |
| PR-03 | frog eggs; tadpole; frog | First to last. |
| PR-04 | A | Pollination; bat visits for juice, pollen rubs off — no intention wording. |
| PR-05 | C | No seeds and no watermelons. |
| PR-06 | C | Wind; the only carrier named. |
| PR-07 | B | Yes; box over soil, no light. |
| PR-08 | a seed germinates in damp, warm soil; the plant grows and opens its flowers; an insect carries pollen to a flower; seeds form inside the flower; the wind carries the seeds away | First to last from the seed. |
| PR-09 | A | Gradual growth. |
| PR-10 | A | Complete change. |
| PR-11 | A | Pollen. |
| PR-12 | pollen | Typed. |
| PR-13 | seed | Typed. |
| PP-01 | C | Pollen. |
| PP-02 | A | The sticky top. |
| PP-03 | D | Moth, yucca flower to flower; A–C are the lesson's non-examples. |
| PP-04 | C | Wind, ragweed plant to plant. |
| PP-05 | A | Wind. |
| PP-06 | A | Little stalks with knobs; "green cup at the bottom" matches L01-02. |
| PP-07 | D | Flower to the next; C is the back-to-hive non-example. |
| PP-08 | D | Make seeds. |
| PP-09 | A | Tiny parts deep inside, in the green cup; key is the longest option by two words — marginal. |
| PP-10 | A | A cantaloupe with seeds. |
| PP-11 | B | None. |
| PP-12 | C | Wind. |
| PP-13 | B | Water. |
| PP-14 | C | Animal that eats the fruit. |
| PP-15 | D | Water and warmth; consistent. |
| PP-16 | C | The root. |
| PP-17 | C | No bright petals, no sweet juice. |
| PP-18 | B | The moths. |
| PP-19 | C | Gourds only where the open flowers were; gourd is insect-pollinated — honest. |
| PP-20 | A | Hardly any pollen reached the flowers. |
| PP-21 | D | Three. |
| PP-22 | D | Fertilization. |
| PP-23 | A | No pollen reaching its flowers; one lone pawpaw is a true case. |
| PP-24 | B | Fur. |
| PP-25 | B | Wind. |
| PP-26 | D | Fox droppings. |
| PP-27 | A | Space and light. |
| PP-28 | A | Most would die crowded in the shade. |
| PP-29 | B | Warmth. |
| PP-30 | D | Damp, warm, dark; A, C dry, B cold. |
| PP-31 | C | Germinate under the straw; consistent. |
| PP-32 | an oat seed in damp, warm soil; the root grows down; the shoot grows up; the first leaves open | First to last. |
| PP-33 | D | June bug grub. |
| PP-34 | C | Stink bug. |
| PP-35 | A | N, the striped crawler = caterpillar; description shows, does not name. |
| PP-36 | B | L, round body, wavy tail, no legs; M (four legs, short tail) is a possible weaker-student pull — minor. |
| PP-37 | B | Lizard. |
| PP-38 | B | Cicada young with no wings. |
| PP-39 | pollen | Typed. |
| PP-40 | seeds | Typed. |
| PP-41 | C | Bees carry pollen; no intention wording. |
| PP-42 | A | Beaches far along the coast. |
| PP-43 | C | Crowd under the parent. |
| PP-44 | water | Typed; glued dry on a card. |
| PP-45 | warmth | Typed; damp but cold. |
| PP-46 | A | Only water and warmth; consistent with L04. |
| PP-47 | eggs in the pond; tadpole; tadpole with back legs; toad | First to last. |
| PP-48 | B | The tadpole grows up into the frog. |
| PP-49 | D | Its young looks like a small grown-up; A is the tempting over-generalisation. |
| PP-50 | D | Complete change. |
| PP-51 | A | Gradual growth. |
| PP-52 | A | V, the jumper with a wing = grown; T is the tempting older young. |
Adversarial answers (typed items)
| item | correct answer 1 | correct answer 2 | correct answer 3 |
|---|---|---|---|
| PR-12 | the pollen | polen | yellow dust called pollen |
| PR-13 | a seed | seeds | sede |
| PP-39 | the pollen | pollin | pollen dust |
| PP-40 | a seed | seed | seads |
| PP-44 | some water | wet | watter |
| PP-45 | warm | heat | warmpth |
Cross-item notes
- Zucchini (L02-03) and gourd (PP-19) replace the self-pollinating cases; both need an insect, so the keys are honest. Tomato in L02-07 is a brush-pollinated greenhouse crop; the grower's reason (seeds) is the only true option, so it stands.
- Rings (L05-08, L05-09, PP-35, PP-36, PP-52): every stem asks by name; every description is what the eye sees, not the stage's name. L05-01's stem on the same page ("hangs from a twig… hard case") does spell out what a chrysalis looks like before L05-08 asks for it; this is the taught fact, so I would leave it.
- Germination: water + warmth, no light, no soil — consistent across L04, SUMMARY-02, PR-07, PP-15/29/30/31/44/45/46.
- Sorts: every "complete change" case is a grub, maggot, caterpillar, tadpole or wriggler; every "gradual growth" case is a small wingless or small version. No case sits on the line.
- Intention: no item says the bee means to carry pollen or that the plant wants anything. L01-09 and L01-11 key against that myth; PR-04 and PP-18 say "for sweet juice… pollen rubs off".
- "The green cup at the bottom" appears in L01-02 and PP-06; PP-09 says "in the green cup" — one phrase.
- Names: Tamara, Zoey, Theodore — distinct first letters and lengths; no merge.
- Key by length or shape: PP-09 only (key longest by two words). Yes/no run in L01-03 to L01-11 reads yes, yes, no, no, yes, no, no, no, yes — no pattern.
- Unmet term: PR-02 option A "spores".
Would not ship as is: none. Minor polish worth a look: PR-02 (replace "spores" with a met word such as "petals" already there, or "roots"), PP-09 (trim A by two words), PP-36 (M is a tadpole with legs to a weaker reader; the key L still stands).